This is my first attempt at quiet horror, tell me what you think.
It's also kind of short, but... whatever. I can't really figure out how it could be much longer.
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allie68 4:34 pm: REALLY!?!
luv54 4:34 pm: yeah and i wuz like "ha ha, yeah right."
allie68 4:35 pm: showd him
luv54 4:35 pm: yeah
allie68 4:35 pm: im bored
luv54 4:35 pm: yeah me too.
luv54 4:36 pm: yawn
allie68 4:37 pm: did you hear about that new vd by... umm i dont know one sec...
allie68 4:37 pm: *cd
luv54 4:38 pm: one sec there's this sound somewhere in the house. lemme check it out. :p
allie68 4:38 pm: lol ok cya.
luv54 4:38 pm: yeh.
allie68 4:40 pm: ok its avril lavgine i think.
allie68 4:41 pm: you back yet?
allie68 4:43 pm: ...
allie68 4:45 pm: cmon im bored. get back here
allie68 4:46 pm: cmon!!!!!
allie68 4:50 pm: ok r u jk?
allie68 4:51 pm: its been like 20 min.
allie68 5:02 pm: did sumthing happen?
allie68 5:04 pm: ok I'm scared now. come back.
allie68 5:04 pm: sumthing happened... right?...
allie68 5:05 pm: oh noo...
allie68 5:06 pm: ha yeah right your just jk. come back....
(5:08 pm: luv54 has been disconnected due to inactivity)
allie68 5:08 pm: ok im calling 911
(5:09 pm: allie68 has signed off)
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Ookay. I don't think it's too great, but, see what you think.
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